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A Rock Concert

Please see Ellis1342 's art to know what the OC look like, all credit for them goes to her, I have a few other stories with some of them in it already witch you may want to read first if it so pleases you, if not then I hope you have a nice day anyway :)

     "Yep that's right I got us all back stage passes to 'The Bronies'!" "The best band in all of Equestria!" Dash exclaimed wile holding up seven tickets.
     She was facing the gang along with Spike and the cutie mark crusaders inside Twilights library. She looked at the CMC with guilt across her face. "Sorry girls I hadn't met you yet when I requested the tickets." Sweetie Bell managed to look more up set then Scootaloo, but AppleBloom just shrugged.
     "I don't like rock I like country."
     "How can you say that!" Interjected Sweetie "They are the best!"
     "And that Flying V is such a hunk!" Pinkie had been bouncing around talking about how much she loved The Bronies as soon as Dash mentioned them, but Dash had learned to tune her out, but she had heard that last part. Dash thought about saying something but wanted to surprise them with the fact V was her boyfriend plus Pinkie hadn't stopped talking.
     "They've been on tour all year going all over the place rocking out!" "I love their song 'Party in Equestria', it's my favorite." "I hope we can get their autographs!"
     "If I could get them let me design the outfits for their next show I could get the younger generation to notice me." Rarity said not paying any mind to Pinkie who still had not stopped talking.
     "You do that Rair," Dash said rolling her eyes at her statement. "You all are coming right?" "Please, it won't be any fun with out my friends."
Applebloom used the distraction to get out of there dragging the other two with her.  
     "Come on girls, we've go crusading to do!"
     "But I want to hang out with Dash!" complained Scootaloo.
     "I wish we had gotten tickets too, I love The Bronies!"
     They were interrupted when a young yellow and blue pegasus colt that looked about heir age landed in front of them.
     "Hey Im looking for Fluttershy, she's yellow with a pink mane, terrified of everything, you seen her" He said with out so much as a hello.
     "Yea we know Fluttershy she's our friend." Scoots answered.
     A second pegasus landed behind the colt, an adult with white fur and a blue mane.
     "Racer be polite." he said giving Racer a stern look. "Hello my name is Chief this is my son Racer and Fluttershy is my daughter, could you tell me were she is please, she wasn't home?"
     "Fluttershy is in the library with her friends." Sweetie answered.
     "I didn't know she had a brother, but I recon it's cause she doesn't say much." Bloom said addressing Racer.
     As Racer started talking to the girls Chief walk to the library. "I'll be right back don't go no where."
     "Ok dad."

     Chief trotted on up to the library and opened the door carefully. Seven heads turned to look at him all at once, he stopped in his tracks, if this building had been on fire he would of had no trouble bursting in and rescuing all seven ponies but he didn't care for large groups of ponies that weren't on fire. Luckily Fluttershy bonded up to him and threw her front legs around him in a big bear hug.
     Rarity leaned over to Twilight and whispered. "Who is that hunk?" "I need find out Fluttershys secret, she get's all the stallions."
     Twilight gave her a look. "He looks old enough to be your dad."
     "Oh darling you'll understand one day." Rarity purred wile checking out Chief.
     "I sure hope not." Twilight said with a shudder.

    Fluttershy let go of her dad. "What brings you to Ponyville?" "Is everything all right?" It looked like she was starting to panic but Chief assured her everything was fine.
     "Racer wanted to know if he could stay with you so he could visit with V when he gets into town."
     "Of course daddy, I would be happy to watch him, but where is he?"
     "Oh he's right out side talking to a couple of fillies."
     "Are they yellow, white, and orange?"
     "Yea they said they knew you."
     Fluttershy rushed to the window but she already knew what she'd find, Racer and the girls were gone.
     "I'll go find them." Fluttershy said as she rushed out the door.
     Chief looked back at the others then tipped his hat.
     "Ladies." he said politely before making a bee line to the exit.
     Dash rolled her eyes, that entire family was strange even V, especially V.
     "That's Fluttershy's dad?"  "He is very handsome, Fluttershy's mom is a lucky mare!" Rarity stated, behind her Spike crossed his arms and huffed annoyed that he had more competition.
     "Fluttershy's mom passed away a long time ago." Dash replied sadly
     Rarity shook her head "I'm sorry, I didn't know."
     "Anyway, that aside, you all are going to go with me right?"
     "I reckon I could make it." Applejack was the first to answer followed by Pinkie.
     "YOU BET DASHY!" "Concerts are like big parties! "
     "I don't know I have a lot of studying to do." Twilight said weakly, Dash gave her a look.
     "Really Twilight, I, your most loyal friend, buy you special limited one of a kind ticket and you're going to tell me you would rather study."
     "Ok ok, I'll go but they can't be one of a kind there is at lest seven of them."
     "I shaw go as well, but you must let me pay you back for the cost of the ticket." Rarity said ready to argue the point.
     "That's ok Rair, you made my dress for the Gala so just consider us even."
     "If you insist dear."
     Dash looked over at Spike, he held up his fist and Dash met it with her hoof.
"Lets rock!" Spike said as he brought out his air guitar, and Dash beat on some invisible drums.

     They had hung out for a wile after that before Dash had to leave for the afternoon weather shift. She did manage to grab a book from the library before leaving, it was a horror book called The Horse Fly, it was about a unicorn mage that was experiment with a powerful teleporting spell when something goes horribly wrong. Twilight recommended it, saying it had given her chills for a week.
The weather had been a breeze literally and Dash got to head home early, passing over Ponyville she spotted Fluttershy and the kids talking with Big Mac, she waved but no one saw her.
    "I wonder what they are up to?" she asked to herself as she flew on to her house in the sky.
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GabrieldlTC's avatar
I like how you didn't just forced him into the original story, instead dash more like keeping it as a little non important secret